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    dots Submission Name: Time's Reflectionsdots
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    Author: Blue Monk
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 1585/461/128
    Words: 57
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Description:
       Another oldie missing from this collection. Actually, a margarita wouldn't be bad right now.


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    dotsTime's Reflectionsdots
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    Ages fore and aft,
    converging peak to peak
    these waves of time
    reflect their source,

    set in the middle
    ride these unknowing mortals
    upon such tides which
    can change if they but seek.

    Oh drama, such drama
    set on a stage so bold
    while up above the puppeteer
    drinks margaritas cold




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