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    dots Submission Name: Evolved?dots
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    Author: Blue Monk
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 1573/461/128
    Words: 97
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       Still pulling out old stuff to store here. I hope someone is enjoying some of it.


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    dotsEvolved?dots
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    Sponge to coral I've become -
    was once absorbing, now I'm numb...
    forgetfulness has petrified
    that flux of knowledge now has dried.

    Is this the cruel result of age,
    no longer can I be a sage?
    That mother called eternity
    looms largely with hostility.

    Medical bills are in excess,
    change diet or be in distress.
    Senses failing or withdrawn?
    Bones which ache with each new dawn,

    and teens who think they have it bad?
    What would I do for what I had!




    Submitted on 2021-01-05 14:59:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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