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    dots Submission Name: only if hell has frozen overdots

    Author: cornonthekob
    Elite Ratio:    6.13 - 675/504/469
    Words: 176
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsonly if hell has frozen overdots

    three cheers allowed for the new administration
    no holds are barred in the lengths of institution
    follow your heart or follow your favorite parts of the constitution
    conspiracy comes easily but unearthing the whole thing is unlikely to begin with

    wear your favorite set of ideals
    while the children set trends in how we feel
    hashtag debauchery for subcultures illiteracy
    both sides converse with self interest
    the evidence isn't obvious
    it's incidental and systemic
    different bodies in the blood stream
    fighting off the pathogens
    fabricating antibodies

    take your place in the mirror of your faith
    because reality is in bloom to give you chills and shakes
    for all the holier entities do you compare yourself to those like me?
    do you ever take the time to find the forest for the trees

    take it back to a simpler set of flaws
    I'm willing to compromise and follow the law
    back to begin with i needed art that i could draw
    but I'm just hanging in the back waiting for earth to thaw.

    Submitted on 2021-01-25 20:06:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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