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    dots Submission Name: "Hatred Often Anonymous", 2021dots
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    Author: Rex Gold
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 334/142/220
    Words: 241
    Class/Type: Poetry/Society
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    dots"Hatred Often Anonymous", 2021dots
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    It's hilarious that hatred waits
    For me to die so it can be itself
    Trying to keep it's screaming head in check
    Hatred fears change so it calls me Threat
    You know, jealous beast coast
    But would die in vain out west
    Trembling with it's axe before swings
    Hatred struggles to be iconic everything-

    Hatred is forgotten
    Twenty to thirty years down a line
    After I held my nuts
    While clinching the great bottle of wine
    As in: Don't like me, I like me
    As it remains a disorder inside
    Hatred avoids mirrors
    And it's heart might as well be vacant
    I have so much smoke for it
    But hatred just can't be patient
    Hatred has a peephole
    With the nerve of quiet contemplation
    It uses a pair of True Night Vision
    Having Cluster B self conversations
    Like a roach that works in the dark
    Something corny can't throw that deep
    So it seeks to play agressive underneath
    All the sketchy people who became police
    All the people hatred couldn't tear apart
    Hatred often a group of obsessed creeps
    Who rather wake up hating
    Before even brushing their damn teeth
    Hatred may assume poor education
    Being full of shit during confrontation
    And it can fuel an entire nation..


    Just let them bark. They rarely bite-




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