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    dots Submission Name: winning at a loss for wordsdots
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    Author: cornonthekob
    Elite Ratio:    6.13 - 675/504/469
    Words: 289
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
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    dotswinning at a loss for wordsdots
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    put me back together if i start to fall apart
    pick up all the pieces baby we could call it art
    am i better off alone past the point of no return
    am i meant to hold it back and leave my insides to burn

    what am i but a little bit of nothin
    next to you i wanna stand next to you
    every ones lookin for a little taste of somethin
    but maybe it's my attitude am i being rude

    if you'd misconstrue the moment you'd see it just like me
    a little bit of heaven with a devils dose of misery
    are you hard to crack or unaware, golly god i'd love to stare
    but i don't even know your name so it wouldn't be fair

    what am i but a little bit of nothin
    next to you i wanna stand next to you
    every ones lookin for a little taste of somethin
    but maybe it's my attitude am i being rude

    keep it on the inside
    let it burn too slow
    looking through the highlights
    what do i really know
    what would you do
    if a made a move
    sometimes losers win
    and winners lose

    what am i but a little bit of nothin
    next to you i wanna stand next to you
    every ones lookin for a little taste of somethin
    but maybe it's my attitude am i being rude

    keep it on the inside
    let it burn too slow
    looking through the highlights
    what do i really know
    what would you do
    if a made a move
    sometimes losers win
    and winners lose
    what would you do
    if i made a move
    sometimes losers win
    and winners lose




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