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    dots Submission Name: truth be tolddots
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    Author: cornonthekob
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    Words: 112
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotstruth be tolddots
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    there is no prism of light
    you are a prisoner of your mind
    all that shines is just a lie
    it looks like timber in your eye

    i know you've got your little tricks
    but are you good enough to get out quick
    this trickle of hope isn't yours to keep
    you should really invest your time in what's beneath

    you are dancing all alone
    missing moves of your own jig
    sooner or later you're bound to grow
    but who are you to kid

    you bear it all or grind your teeth
    be polite and be discreet
    remember what you believed in your youth
    mental illness bears no fruit




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