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    Author: cornonthekob
    Elite Ratio:    6.13 - 675/504/469
    Words: 238
    Class/Type: Poetry/Mirror or Mask
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    one gift is all you get in the eye of opportunity
    singing like a song you hum along to insanity
    nothing ever changes it's the sameness you desire
    grandiosity is a chemical thing, you're warm by a fire

    another day of dire straights to sit alone and contemplate
    just because it's real to me doesn't mean it is that way
    grinding all my life trying to do what's right with irony
    saved by the grace that fate was here to favor me

    I've gotta gallon of snake oil but i'm not looking to sell
    regardless of the subconscious evidence i do want to get well
    i've seen people like me spread their social disease
    and i start to believe that it's a poison we need

    i mean who am i to say what's a drug from what's a dose
    but i'm caught up in the shit won't come out smelling like a rose
    face down from the clouds i don't notice the rain
    i'm not too cold and i've been told that it won't drown me anyway

    i am fine with the line i draw to keep me from succumbing to my condition
    a daily deviation from the maelstroms of imagination to start out with
    fragments of that chaos still exist in this sullen frame of mind
    so i pick at the wound and assume it's what i'm suppose to do to feel alive




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