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    dots Submission Name: negotiations with a psychotic minddots
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    Author: cornonthekob
    Elite Ratio:    6.13 - 675/504/469
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsnegotiations with a psychotic minddots
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    it is better to live on in a heart
    a page can burn in many ways
    a heart can weather many storms
    scrutinizing are the eyes of fame

    too many droplets to strike a match
    and i wonder if it is rain or gasoline
    with a more astute understanding of my environment
    i will be able to discern what this means

    the fantasy is fine with me
    as it still allows me mobility
    but as a parallel to it all
    i'd like to make a career mining




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