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    dots Submission Name: Eyes On Firedots
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    Author: MyPeriodical
    ASL Info:    18/m/pr
    Elite Ratio:    4.11 - 314/249/362
    Words: 328
    Class/Type: Story/Nostalgia
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    dotsEyes On Firedots
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    As I lay here in the high of snorting pain killers and a medium bottle of sweet apple wine mixed with blue juice
    I just want to tell you what rushed through my mind as I listened to the dubstep song of Eyes On Fire

    I trailed back to when I was swimming in the ocean
    Of 10 feet deep
    Hearing the dolphins, or the engines of the boats ringing - I don't know
    The times I walked there at the beach at night and saw the rocks reflected in crystal black waters
    The nightmares that i've had and the pure insanity of slicing my wrists and face into a joker smile
    Of clawing at my skin
    Of dropping acid multiple times over the course of 6 months, years before
    And the beginnings of my self destruction when I was 12, cutting my wrist for the first time in an orange room with peeling walls and a crucifix overhead

    The frivolity of having kissed a boy all through the night only to realize that the Sun had rose

    All these memories came rushing to me as I felt most completely the flash back of sinking and rising in the waters, completely sober
    When I had balance and stability in my life
    The absolution of constant movement- that it's already here

    So many memories I could tell you, but so fast as it had come, it was all gone
    And I can't stop thinking about how people might think I lie
    but I will tell you this

    Of all the cosmetic chaos, I have acquired reasoning
    And of all the cosmic happenings, I have acquired understanding

    That the cosmos have only just begun.

    The universe, existence in and of itself is wholly unfathomable
    And there are powers beyond what even our Earthly God can see
    There is time
    Unmeasurable time
    Time beyond imaginary numbers, for there is pain
    And we are fickle.




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