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Pain/O Mercy be

Author: MyPeriodical
ASL Info:    18/m/pr
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Pain/O Mercy be

Is my pain a figment of my imagination?
Is it the result of contact and friction?
What of it serves me?

Once you've answered these questions, it's as though you know it all
And you just might,
but what is life without knowing over and over again?

What's more,
a comfort in entirety,
is that there is no separation
and therefore, you do not
In fact
Know everything
For everything is and maybe
Won't be for very long.

Could I have saved you?
Oh God!
Could I have saved you?!

Submitted on 2021-02-18 11:06:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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