Pain/O Mercy be

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Pain/O Mercy be

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Is my pain a figment of my imagination? Is it the result of contact and friction? What of it serves me? Once you've answered these questions, it's as though you know it all And you just might, but what is life without knowing over and over again? What's more, a comfort in entirety, is that there is no separation and therefore, you do not In fact Know everything For everything is and maybe Won't be for very long. Could I have saved you? Oh God! Could I have saved you?!

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