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    dots Submission Name: Pain/O Mercy bedots
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    Author: MyPeriodical
    ASL Info:    18/m/pr
    Elite Ratio:    4.11 - 314/249/362
    Words: 97
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsPain/O Mercy bedots
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    Is my pain a figment of my imagination?
    Is it the result of contact and friction?
    What of it serves me?

    Once you've answered these questions, it's as though you know it all
    And you just might,
    but what is life without knowing over and over again?

    What's more,
    a comfort in entirety,
    is that there is no separation
    and therefore, you do not
    In fact
    Know everything
    For everything is and maybe
    Won't be for very long.





    Could I have saved you?
    Oh God!
    Could I have saved you?!




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