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    dots Submission Name: Balance is inevitabledots
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    Author: MyPeriodical
    ASL Info:    18/m/pr
    Elite Ratio:    4.12 - 314/248/362
    Words: 174
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsBalance is inevitabledots
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    I'm shaking in my distress
    Overanalyzing as anyone does
    And I miss the cold, tactless reverences
    Of addressing the grand accord that is godliness in life
    The scheme of things and its lack of direction
    Just so no opposition wins in the end.
    I miss feeling wholly myself
    Without this medication
    And never in my life had I thought
    That I would become the epitome of those people I once looked up to
    Those who would always stagnate
    Between themselves and another person
    Just so they could get their point across
    Because sitting on the floor, helplessly in my room
    Agonizing over my utter pointlessness
    And straying from it all at the same time- thinking
    That I could possibly have made a dent
    I have come to realize that no one would understand,
    but maybe in this lowly point of communication with you
    You may understand this:

    Everything you do has an impact
    Everything
    And should it be for good or bad
    There is the opposition come again
    And it will refute you.




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