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Suffocated, always

Author: MyPeriodical
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Suffocated, always

My mother set me up for failure. My father, too.
Yet here I am badgering myself for having nowhere to go.
Because if only I could make for the fourth time to do it
To end it
To just die.
And maybe that's why I smoke so much, hoping
It'll draw every last breath of me
Intoxicate me
And squeeze my throat until I do.

Submitted on 2021-02-27 04:50:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Herein lies the crux of it all, drowning out the incessant loudness of the primary caregiver's voice so that our own might surface and be. Thanks for sharing.
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