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    dots Submission Name: Suffocated, alwaysdots
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    Author: MyPeriodical
    ASL Info:    18/m/pr
    Elite Ratio:    4.11 - 314/249/362
    Words: 65
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsSuffocated, alwaysdots
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    My mother set me up for failure. My father, too.
    Yet here I am badgering myself for having nowhere to go.
    Because if only I could make for the fourth time to do it
    To end it
    To just die.
    And maybe that's why I smoke so much, hoping
    It'll draw every last breath of me
    Intoxicate me
    And squeeze my throat until I do.




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