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Submission Name: store.bought dots

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Author:	She Is Insane
Elite Ratio:	3.21 - 40/60/33
Words:	51

Class/Type:	Misc/Misc
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store.bought dots

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they want your lips ,
they buy them with plastics,
extra filler for that store bought pout,
they want your glow,
they spend big dough,
to wear your look,
high cheeks,
narrow eyes,
oh that synthetic guise,
they purchase
just to wear your face.

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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