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Author: She Is Insane
Elite Ratio:    3.21 - 40 /60 /33
Words: 51
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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they want your lips ,
they buy them with plastics,
extra filler for that store bought pout,
they want your glow,
they spend big dough,
to wear your look,
high cheeks,
narrow eyes,
oh that synthetic guise,
they purchase
just to wear your face.

Submitted on 2021-02-28 14:46:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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