Phoenix by Kitkara

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Author:	Kitkara
ASL Info:	19, Female, and in MO
Elite Ratio:	6.6 - 25/25/16
Words:	65

Class/Type:	Misc/Misc
Total Views:	35
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	386

Description:
Rewritten musings of a previous writing now lost.

Phoenix

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I am a Phoenix.

You can bring me down
Tear me apart
Rip me to pieces

But once I die
I am reborn anew

So bring me down
Tear me apart
Rip me to pieces

Watch me burst into flames
For when I emerge

I will be better
I will be stronger
I will be enlightened

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