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Phoenix


Author: Kitkara
ASL Info:    19, Female, and in MO
Elite Ratio:    6.6 - 25 /25 /16
Words: 65
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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Rewritten musings of a previous writing now lost.


Phoenix



I am a Phoenix.

You can bring me down
Tear me apart
Rip me to pieces

But once I die
I am reborn anew

So bring me down
Tear me apart
Rip me to pieces

Watch me burst into flames
For when I emerge

I will be better
I will be stronger
I will be enlightened




Submitted on 2021-03-30 22:54:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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