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    dots Submission Name: Phoenix dots
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    Author: Kitkara
    ASL Info:    19, Female, and in MO
    Elite Ratio:    6.6 - 25/25/16
    Words: 65
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 35
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 386



    Description:
       Rewritten musings of a previous writing now lost.


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    dotsPhoenix dots
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    I am a Phoenix.

    You can bring me down
    Tear me apart
    Rip me to pieces

    But once I die
    I am reborn anew

    So bring me down
    Tear me apart
    Rip me to pieces

    Watch me burst into flames
    For when I emerge

    I will be better
    I will be stronger
    I will be enlightened




    Submitted on 2021-03-30 22:54:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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