Phoenix

Author: Kitkara ASL Info:    19, Female, and in MO Elite Ratio:    6.6 - 25 /25 /16 Words: 65

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Phoenix

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I am a Phoenix. You can bring me down Tear me apart Rip me to pieces But once I die I am reborn anew So bring me down Tear me apart Rip me to pieces Watch me burst into flames For when I emerge I will be better I will be stronger I will be enlightened

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