Adulting by expiring

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Submission Name: Adulting dots

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Author:	expiring_touch
ASL Info:	30/f/Hamburg
Elite Ratio:	3.97 - 138/252/167
Words:	70

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
Total Views:	243
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	475

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Adulting dots

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Test steps, see? it still tastes
the same - apple sweet with some leftover
clairvoyant bitterness:
they say noone - more than 2
I‘s would have died in this timespan
- cells turned over (in their sleep):
confident, fatter, agile, biased
towards
noone
but myself
(check out this sun slanting, breaking off the textured page,
louped air bubbles in resin):
"I am free".

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