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    dots Submission Name: Adultingdots
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    Author: expiring_touch
    ASL Info:    30/f/Hamburg
    Elite Ratio:    3.97 - 138/252/167
    Words: 70
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsAdultingdots
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    Test steps, see? it still tastes
    the same - apple sweet with some leftover
    clairvoyant bitterness:
    they say noone - more than 2
    I‘s would have died in this timespan
    - cells turned over (in their sleep):
    confident, fatter, agile, biased
    towards
    noone
    but myself
    (check out this sun slanting, breaking off the textured page,
    louped air bubbles in resin):
    "I am free".




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