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Adulting


Author: expiring_touch
ASL Info:    30/f/Hamburg
Elite Ratio:    3.93 - 139 /258 /171
Words: 70
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Adulting



Test steps, see? it still tastes
the same - apple sweet with some leftover
clairvoyant bitterness:
they say noone - more than 2
I‘s would have died in this timespan
- cells turned over (in their sleep):
confident, fatter, agile, biased
towards
noone
but myself
(check out this sun slanting, breaking off the textured page,
louped air bubbles in resin):
"I am free".




Submitted on 2021-04-25 15:04:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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