Adulting

Author: expiring_touch ASL Info:    30/f/Hamburg Elite Ratio:    3.93 - 139 /258 /171 Words: 70

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Adulting

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Test steps, see? it still tastes the same - apple sweet with some leftover clairvoyant bitterness: they say noone - more than 2 I‘s would have died in this timespan - cells turned over (in their sleep): confident, fatter, agile, biased towards noone but myself (check out this sun slanting, breaking off the textured page, louped air bubbles in resin): "I am free".

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