Lanterns

Author: obsidiandreams ASL Info:    29/M/Canada Elite Ratio:    3.53 - 169 /212 /107 Words: 55

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Lanterns

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The lanterns of the past, are the ones that light the path; They're the sparks of our embarkment on this journey of advance; The symbols of our hardships and the scars of our mishaps; They're the memory of everything, neglected, when in fact; They should be harbored in our hearts as marks of their impact

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