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Submission Name: Lanterns dots

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Author:	obsidiandreams
ASL Info:	29/M/Canada
Elite Ratio:	3.53 - 169/212/107
Words:	55

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
Total Views:	206
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	343

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Lanterns dots

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The lanterns of the past, are the ones that light the path;
They're the sparks of our embarkment on this journey of advance;
The symbols of our hardships and the scars of our mishaps;
They're the memory of everything, neglected, when in fact;
They should be harbored in our hearts as marks of their impact

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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