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Open Space

Author: obsidiandreams
ASL Info:    29/M/Canada
Elite Ratio:    3.53 - 169 /212 /107
Words: 126
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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Open Space

Sometimes, the heart needs room to beat,
Sometimes, the soul needs space to breathe,
and sometimes, the chaos is a gift beyond measure.
The randomness a spotlit pathway to adventure,
should you choose to not ignore the opportunity.
The journey is not always paved, nor trodden.
It will require guile in the face of bewilderment,
bravery in spite of fear, and effort despite fatigue.
However the reward is nourishment beyond consumption.
The refilling of the cup forgotten.
The rebirth of the sense that this world is vast, and we, we are small but mighty.
So reach for straws of starlight, cut the ties that bind you.
Sprint towards the darkness, for the light amongst the madness.
That light, is the most brilliant you'll ever see.

Submitted on 2021-06-18 21:03:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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