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    dots Submission Name: "To Execute A Proper Orange", 2020dots

    Author: Rex Gold
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 334/142/220
    Words: 571
    Class/Type: Poetry/Political
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    dots"To Execute A Proper Orange", 2020dots

    All this time and effort...
    Tied to your emotional psyche.
    Where grind does all the talking;
    far from the showing of mediocrity
    Because excellence meets obsession.
    Now is the time to do you unapologetically


    As you differ in chroma
    From atomic to Papaya whip
    As the secret to non-accidental
    stubbornness with a purpose:
    Others wait for you to arrive,
    like a question mark revealing
    a great difficulty during Crayola hair.

    Taste is an old construct.
    The scenes usually infested
    with snobs covering an important trend;
    accusing each other of pretention.
    Tangerine became a business
    for them to feel intellectual--
    Nothing could pass as holy among them
    if the Gods are blind and deaf,,,

    It won't breathe this way
    you becoming more self conscious,
    as you rush and panic to innovate.
    What then if you totally transform?
    Into what everyone wants to become,,,
    What then as you don't fit criteria?
    I just want you to be yourself--
    Even when you find out
    Paul Cézanne was laughed at

    Cluttered advertising
    over a sense of self
    awaiting those in hurry to anxiety
    The glorification of theft
    sits as a plexiglass box roped off.
    While you value forthright Seashell--
    I wonder what will you get away with

    You can't be your past...
    You can't be all the times you fucked up.
    Allowing resistance to take you
    is an ethical crime you sponsored.
    I advise you during grind season;
    so that your own sword never harms you.
    Do not give power to the word 'No'.
    Tomorrow is different-
    The entire life is welcomed by encouragement after years already passed.

    Since when have you been a quitter?
    When have you gave up turning charcoal
    to daisies way after a morning fog?

    The sky won't always be tea rose.
    Moments won't always be vivid coral.
    I just want you to be yourself--
    Don't be a product made to catch attention.
    The courageous have been themselves.
    I just want you to be yourself--

    The reinvention to make up over
    from all the muck in our set lives-
    Not one in any crowd will rescue us
    as you can't afford to go to bed
    with an emptiness that use to creep in--
    For all your faults and texture of voice;
    may someone interested still be amazed
    by the Vermilion of your heart's stance

    There is no safety net.
    You hold the sword - Now lift it with love

    My dear,
    Fall onto the world as a thunderbolt.

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