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"The character with no soul", 2020

Author: Rex Gold
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Class/Type: Poetry /I hate you
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"The character with no soul", 2020


The cuteness never evolves
It's either the mascot
of an evil company
or the generational taunt
unto clots of public admission--
Extensively forced on innocence.
Even the vintage steamboat
is full of crap holes
Even the creator afraid of mice
And we're suppose to care
about his wardrobe?
Suppose to look out
for the fifty versions of his ears
As kids get swapped to disappear
For money to march around,
being damage learning of the world.
Don't grin at me like that;
It's fucking true.
He's an old trickster to a natural world.
You'll be accepting less factual learning
After I turned away
from such power over fools.

- Mickey Mouse -

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