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    dots Submission Name: "The character with no soul", 2020dots
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    Author: Rex Gold
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 334/142/220
    Words: 138
    Class/Type: Poetry/I hate you
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    dots"The character with no soul", 2020dots
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    READER DISCRETION IS ADVISED.







    The cuteness never evolves
    It's either the mascot
    of an evil company
    or the generational taunt
    unto clots of public admission--
    Extensively forced on innocence.
    Even the vintage steamboat
    is full of crap holes
    Even the creator afraid of mice
    And we're suppose to care
    about his wardrobe?
    Suppose to look out
    for the fifty versions of his ears
    As kids get swapped to disappear
    For money to march around,
    being damage learning of the world.
    Don't grin at me like that;
    It's fucking true.
    He's an old trickster to a natural world.
    You'll be accepting less factual learning
    After I turned away
    from such power over fools.


    - Mickey Mouse -




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