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    dots Submission Name: "Mirror of Courage", 2021dots

    Author: Rex Gold
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 334/142/220
    Words: 357
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dots"Mirror of Courage", 2021dots

    I tell you of courage, as we all should have
    A gamble for the good when all is bad
    To apply it to instruments in defiant hands
    To see risk later on mock a fearful man

    Life is beautiful or not entirely so
    Peace be found during anxiety row
    When it becomes hard to carry on
    Remember to look within for very long

    When you are bruised, burned, bashed
    Remember the true self as breath be pass
    May your past and present be one
    Even out of Hell with some teeth gone

    When chaos makes it's appearance
    Show gratitude to both water and fire
    For when the brave draw near it
    Strength has embraced mother Gaia

    Remember the mirror as spine touches wall
    Stand up for yourself when time has called
    Keep your pearls, do not box the pigs
    Never feel small since they do not think big

    When you question do you deserve to live
    Remember what you cherish deeply
    The mirror reflects all the good you did
    No matter who has not seen it. You see.

    Let nothing cause you hurtful drain
    When you decide to make another change
    Be right to live the best way you can
    Kindness pays, your path shall pan

    Only you know what resonates with you
    When confusion enters your search of truth
    Show courtesy to the qualified Stoic
    The right thing to do you will know it

    When prayerful with or without winds
    For no flesh shall cover your friends
    Be you familiar with Earth again
    Many wars have outlasted torn up skin

    Courage to you as you newly begin
    A protection like bright caverns for gems
    Discern whomever the universe sends
    Or particular hearts you look to defend


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      I appreciate the wisdom here. Reflections do not necessarily require a physical mirror. Perhaps the internal reflections pose less distortion than that which passes through the filters of the world. There's more than a hint of mystic on exhibition here. Gold is a good name. Resonance is good.

    | Posted on 2021-09-12 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
      There is plenty of food for thought here! I need to have more courage! x Thank you for the inspiration x
    | Posted on 2021-07-09 00:00:00 | by Alter idem | [ Reply to This ]

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