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Anger is a Funny thing

Author: Forgiven
ASL Info:    38/F/Florida
Elite Ratio:    3.8 - 339 /335 /100
Words: 143
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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having a fight with someone always makes you reflect

Anger is a Funny thing

There are broken pieces
strewn about the floor

my thoughts are of the dust
and the wishing for something more

I'm troubled by the pieces
they never go back right

I end up trying to tidy them
all the days and through the night.

Ive been found and lost again
asleep among the weeds

I try to listen to what is said
but its not what my mind heeds

My mind is full of other things
but I couldn't tell you what

I lose my life by endlessly
sitting on my butt.

Lets suppose its laziness
possibly extensively more

But to define it complications
would prove to be a chore

So here I sit writing
it seems to calm it's beast

whose only source of happiness
is not mine in the least.

Submitted on 2021-07-07 19:41:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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