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    dots Submission Name: Anger is a Funny thingdots

    Author: Forgiven
    ASL Info:    38/F/Florida
    Elite Ratio:    3.8 - 339/335/100
    Words: 143
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       having a fight with someone always makes you reflect

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    dotsAnger is a Funny thingdots

    There are broken pieces
    strewn about the floor

    my thoughts are of the dust
    and the wishing for something more

    I'm troubled by the pieces
    they never go back right

    I end up trying to tidy them
    all the days and through the night.

    Ive been found and lost again
    asleep among the weeds

    I try to listen to what is said
    but its not what my mind heeds

    My mind is full of other things
    but I couldn't tell you what

    I lose my life by endlessly
    sitting on my butt.

    Lets suppose its laziness
    possibly extensively more

    But to define it complications
    would prove to be a chore

    So here I sit writing
    it seems to calm it's beast

    whose only source of happiness
    is not mine in the least.

    Submitted on 2021-07-07 19:41:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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