A little Ditty

Author: Forgiven ASL Info:    38/F/Florida Elite Ratio:    3.8 - 339 /335 /100 Words: 89

Class/Type: Poetry /Happy Total Views: 648 Average Vote:    No vote yet. Bytes: 662

Description:

---

A little Ditty

---

To the stars in the sky, Celebrations in July Something in my eye Sweet potato pie. A birthday in France tattoos of pants, long winded rants, an entire list of cants. Preferred shaken not stirred. Lines not blurred. Milk with no curd. NSA equals bird. Lines made for writing Lips made for biting Fists made for fighting, all while allnighting. I could continue but I digress, lets say its the stress. Lots of unrest. I tried my best... Denise

Submitted on 2021-07-13 13:37:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
Edit post

Rate This Submission

1: >_< 2: I dunno... 3: meh! 4: Pretty cool 5: Wow!

Comments

Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

1. Be honest. 2. Try not to give only compliments. 3. How did it make you feel? 4. Why did it make you feel that way? 5. Which parts? 6. What distracted from the piece?

7. What was unclear? 8. What does it remind you of? 9. How could it be improved? 10. What would you have done differently? 11. What was your interpretation of it? 12. Does it feel original?

202776