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    dots Submission Name: A little Dittydots
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    Author: Forgiven
    ASL Info:    38/F/Florida
    Elite Ratio:    3.8 - 339/334/100
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Poetry/Happy
    Total Views: 245
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 662



    Description:
       I love writing when I feel silly! Here to all my July Cancerian brothers and Sisters, especially the July 12th ones!!!


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsA little Dittydots
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    To the stars in the sky,
    Celebrations in July
    Something in my eye
    Sweet potato pie.



    A birthday in France
    tattoos of pants,
    long winded rants,
    an entire list of cants.

    Preferred shaken not stirred.
    Lines not blurred.
    Milk with no curd.
    NSA equals bird.

    Lines made for writing
    Lips made for biting
    Fists made for fighting,
    all while allnighting.

    I could continue but I digress,
    lets say its the stress.
    Lots of unrest.


    I tried my best...


    Denise




    Submitted on 2021-07-13 13:37:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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