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A little Ditty

Author: Forgiven
ASL Info:    38/F/Florida
Elite Ratio:    3.8 - 339 /335 /100
Words: 89
Class/Type: Poetry /Happy
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I love writing when I feel silly! Here to all my July Cancerian brothers and Sisters, especially the July 12th ones!!!

A little Ditty

To the stars in the sky,
Celebrations in July
Something in my eye
Sweet potato pie.

A birthday in France
tattoos of pants,
long winded rants,
an entire list of cants.

Preferred shaken not stirred.
Lines not blurred.
Milk with no curd.
NSA equals bird.

Lines made for writing
Lips made for biting
Fists made for fighting,
all while allnighting.

I could continue but I digress,
lets say its the stress.
Lots of unrest.

I tried my best...


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