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    Author: Forgiven
    ASL Info:    38/F/Florida
    Elite Ratio:    3.8 - 339/334/100
    Words: 88
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nostalgia
    Total Views: 223
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       As I read comments people leave and see others read my work I feel so appreciative to have other talented people taking the time to read my stuff. So thank you, Ive been here for quite some time and I dont think I would be who I am as a writer if not for this place and all my like minded poets. Best wishes for you all!!


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    Dearest readers of the words
    lifters of the spirits
    finders of the meanings
    healers of my soul

    You are the helpers
    in a world of reverse thoughts
    nothing predictable
    however yours in unchanging

    Comments given freely
    with nothing for return
    except my hearts full happiness
    as I know you can understand me

    Just a little something
    written in our common tongue
    a note of sincere appreciation
    of all who take the moments
    to hear my souls breathing

    You are so loved and appreciated
    --
    Denise




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