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To all who read me


Author: Forgiven
ASL Info:    38/F/Florida
Elite Ratio:    3.8 - 339 /335 /100
Words: 88
Class/Type: Poetry /Nostalgia
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As I read comments people leave and see others read my work I feel so appreciative to have other talented people taking the time to read my stuff. So thank you, Ive been here for quite some time and I dont think I would be who I am as a writer if not for this place and all my like minded poets. Best wishes for you all!!


To all who read me


Dearest readers of the words
lifters of the spirits
finders of the meanings
healers of my soul

You are the helpers
in a world of reverse thoughts
nothing predictable
however yours in unchanging

Comments given freely
with nothing for return
except my hearts full happiness
as I know you can understand me

Just a little something
written in our common tongue
a note of sincere appreciation
of all who take the moments
to hear my souls breathing

You are so loved and appreciated
--
Denise




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