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the lovers by the lake


Author: gwenn sundala
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Words: 150
Class/Type: Poetry /Passion
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felt inspired after a walk around my favorite spot by the lake


the lovers by the lake



the passage of time was all but erased
when it came to the lovers by the lake
mothers would hurry their children past
it did not phase the lovers by the lake
indulging in their own embrace
the soft, warm touch as he caressed her face

a gentle breeze danced through the trees
yet did not cool the lovers by the lake
the titters and whispers of passers-by
would not deter the lovers by the lake
the heat of passion taking over
as they held each other, their hearts soared

the sun began to leave the sky
say goodnight to the lovers by the lake
twilight caresses where the sky meets the sea
time to go for the lovers by the lake
hours escape me when you are here
so i return home and dream of your kiss




Submitted on 2021-07-20 22:35:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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