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Causing The Great Divide

Author: Janesaddiction
ASL Info:    48/F/Somewhere on A1A
Elite Ratio:    1.93 - 8 /25 /20
Words: 83
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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Causing The Great Divide

Left against right
black against white,
faces in hiding
world dividing

History erased
monuments defaced,
tempers flare
cities in disrepair

Lies told
souls sold,
hypocrisy in control
enslaved by the dole

Sister against brother
one choosing for the other,
personal decisions
make for guest list revisions

Coming of age
world is a stage,
stifled voices
ghastly choices

Score the end game
collect your remains,
elusive the door
prior to nineteen eighty-four

Submitted on 2021-08-05 00:10:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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