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    dots Submission Name: Causing The Great Dividedots
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    Author: Janesaddiction
    ASL Info:    48/F/Somewhere on A1A
    Elite Ratio:    1.93 - 8/25/20
    Words: 83
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 168
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    dotsCausing The Great Dividedots
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    Left against right
    black against white,
    faces in hiding
    world dividing

    History erased
    monuments defaced,
    tempers flare
    cities in disrepair

    Lies told
    souls sold,
    hypocrisy in control
    enslaved by the dole

    Sister against brother
    one choosing for the other,
    personal decisions
    make for guest list revisions

    Coming of age
    world is a stage,
    stifled voices
    ghastly choices

    Score the end game
    collect your remains,
    elusive the door
    prior to nineteen eighty-four




    Submitted on 2021-08-05 00:10:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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