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    dots Submission Name: Jazzdots
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    Author: Soul-Hugger
    ASL Info:    33/F/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 409/222/66
    Words: 176
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsJazzdots
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    If I could speak
    another language,
    wrap my tongue around
    its unfamiliar syllables,
    I would speak the language of jazz.


    If I could pull a sentence from
    the clouds, write it on your heart,
    if I could make it make sense to you,
    make it fuse to your cells
    like electric lightning fuses itself to the sky,


    just before that, and not a moment sooner,
    I would hold a note
    just a fraction off-key,
    toss in some soft piano,
    jive with fluid, soulful sweetness,


    and just when you might begin to wonder
    at the harmony of it all; just then,
    and not a moment sooner,
    I would rivet together a wall of sound,
    a bright ribbon, silken rainbows flailing,
    so that it hits your body's center like a wave breaking,
    as smooth horns deliver ecstatic culmination
    stolen from the sun.


    Then,
    and only then,
    when your head lolls back like a drunken mariner,
    when your eyes expand in lambent rhapsody,
    I would know you speak my language
    too.




    Submitted on 2021-08-23 16:06:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Quite beautiful, thanks! Music is yet another special form of magic and rumor has it that Jazz is actually the most soul expressive. https://www.accuradio.com/smooth-jazz/
    | Posted on 2021-09-12 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]


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