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    dots Submission Name: Wrong at the Right Timesdots
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    Author: Soulraven
    ASL Info:    31/Male/Illinois
    Elite Ratio:    4.05 - 510/481/143
    Words: 47
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 32
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    Bytes: 282



    Description:
       A little poem out of no where


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    dotsWrong at the Right Timesdots
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    I feel all the wrong things at the right times. Surrounded by others feeling alone.
    Parenting yet I’m a child inside.
    Creating but really destroying.
    Loving a person but selfishly.
    I’m better then before but
    Far too broken to be any good.




    Submitted on 2021-08-27 15:27:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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