Wrong at the Right Times by Soulraven

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Author:	Soulraven
ASL Info:	31/Male/Illinois
Elite Ratio:	4.05 - 510/481/143
Words:	47

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
Total Views:	32
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	282

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A little poem out of no where

Wrong at the Right Times dots

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I feel all the wrong things at the right times. Surrounded by others feeling alone.
Parenting yet I’m a child inside.
Creating but really destroying.
Loving a person but selfishly.
I’m better then before but
Far too broken to be any good.

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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