I feel all the wrong things at the right times. Surrounded by others feeling alone.
Parenting yet Iâ€™m a child inside.
Creating but really destroying.
Loving a person but selfishly.
Iâ€™m better then before but
Far too broken to be any good.
| Short and powerful. Full of conflicting or juxtaposed emotions and ideas. Like the essence of humanity indeed. The words and ideas are great. The physical shape is strange. Maybe drop the second sentence down a line for symmetry. Or perhaps the lack thereof is the point. ||| Posted on 2021-12-04 00:00:00 | by Silver20G | [ Reply to This ] || This kind of reminds me of a sad country song. Perhaps a sad country whisky drinking song. I suspect everyone feels this way at times but obviously some are better at hiding it than others. I think you mean "better than before" instead of "then" but that makes me a grammar nazi. This is an "old friends" piece to me, brings back memories.|
|| Posted on 2021-10-02 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ] |