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The fart song

Author: Localfreak
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Just a bit of fun. i promised a friend a song about farting.
What a way to get back into writing eh?

Probably spelling and typing errors galore, try to ignore them for now please

The fart song

Grumbling and growling deep in my insi-des
Feeling the power of the flame
Fighting, igniting the fire of my bowel
Those chilies I ate were insane

Like feaces

All through the night I've been feeling the pain
extending my entrails to max
Rolling and holding but can't stand the strain
finally releasing the gas

Like feaces

stench washes over the bed where we lay
I'm praying you sleep right on through
the noises I muffled, smell I can't contain
I barley stop following through

Like feaces

Submitted on 2021-09-19 10:02:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Just remember, it's gnat chur rull. ;)

| Posted on 2021-09-21 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]

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