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    dots Submission Name: The fart songdots
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    Author: Localfreak
    Elite Ratio:    5.35 - 131/124/77
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Comedy
    Total Views: 63
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 878



    Description:
       Just a bit of fun. i promised a friend a song about farting.
    What a way to get back into writing eh?

    Probably spelling and typing errors galore, try to ignore them for now please


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    dotsThe fart songdots
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    Grumbling and growling deep in my insi-des
    Feeling the power of the flame
    Fighting, igniting the fire of my bowel
    Those chilies I ate were insane

    exploding........
    Erupting........
    Releasing......
    Like feaces

    All through the night I've been feeling the pain
    extending my entrails to max
    Rolling and holding but can't stand the strain
    finally releasing the gas

    exploding........
    Erupting........
    Releasing......
    Like feaces

    stench washes over the bed where we lay
    I'm praying you sleep right on through
    the noises I muffled, smell I can't contain
    I barley stop following through

    exploding........
    Erupting........
    Releasing......
    Like feaces





    Submitted on 2021-09-19 10:02:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Just remember, it's gnat chur rull. ;)

    Lloyd
    | Posted on 2021-09-21 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]


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