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    dots Submission Name: Midtermdots
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    Author: expiring_touch
    ASL Info:    30/f/Hamburg
    Elite Ratio:    3.95 - 139/254/170
    Words: 96
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 134
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    dotsMidtermdots
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    My rage transforms by tremendous pressure
    To misery-
    Regret of beauty- should I have would have could have
    Should‘ve— how much
    this clarity of vision tears
    into glib descent :
    My graveyard of i-wishes

    It does not hurt, not really, or am I too
    Far gone to know
    the difference - like sand sifts through
    too much memory- T Mann and sewn on stars on bright blue
    bikini bottoms— that north of Barcelona
    beach where train tracks spilled
    over
    & took me
    to the skies?




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