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    dots Submission Name: Sunrisedots
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    Author: Blue Monk
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 1586/463/129
    Words: 55
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       I'd call it my realization that I'm as yet still human.


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    dotsSunrisedots
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    Sunrise is a glorious thing
    each day begins anew
    to chase shadows, across the land
    run shadows, run

    Should one have such opportunity
    greet the sunrise
    share in the glory
    cast away the shadows

    My own shadow, however,
    my part of all darkness
    sneaks slowly into self
    and pauses all too briefly




    Submitted on 2021-11-12 15:23:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i suppose your realization is perfectly valid. we're bound to the human condition. the best anyone can do a shift around variables, but the equation remains the same. ever unbalanced.
    | Posted on 2021-12-19 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]


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