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Post workout


Author: expiring_touch
ASL Info:    30/f/Hamburg
Elite Ratio:    3.93 - 139 /258 /171
Words: 34
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Post workout



The cold of after-workout
sweat sets in, it is a wet
film covering my conscience —-
as stark god gazes at
his hands. His double-joints
can hardly bend over
backwards
accommodating everybody




Submitted on 2021-11-25 05:09:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  When in doubt, offer to help? It seems I spend a good deal of my time serving as factotum, but what else can I do?

Lloyd

| Posted on 2022-02-21 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]


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