Post workout

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Post workout

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The cold of after-workout sweat sets in, it is a wet film covering my conscience —- as stark god gazes at his hands. His double-joints can hardly bend over backwards accommodating everybody

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When in doubt, offer to help? It seems I spend a good deal of my time serving as factotum, but what else can I do? Lloyd

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