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Post workout

Author: expiring_touch
ASL Info:    30/f/Hamburg
Elite Ratio:    3.91 - 139 /260 /173
Words: 34
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Post workout

The cold of after-workout
sweat sets in, it is a wet
film covering my conscience —-
as stark god gazes at
his hands. His double-joints
can hardly bend over
accommodating everybody

Submitted on 2021-11-25 05:09:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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