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Author: hyproglo
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Words: 60
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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Where do you live in the hearts
That you’ve captured

In content
In contempt
In confusion
In regret
In love

What level have you skimmed

To consent
To resent
A distraction
An attraction
A free place to s(p)t(l)a(a)y(y)

Where in those hearts
Have you burrowed your soul




Submitted on 2021-12-27 02:49:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I'm not privy to the coding here. This makes it a little difficult to understand what's going on. I appreciate the direction towards the reader but there seems to be a gap, at least for this old fart.

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| Posted on 2022-06-18 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]


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