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One for the Moment

Author: One3Zero
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Words: 140
Class/Type: Poetry /Depressed
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unclear thoughts and confused contemplation. Alone you are your worst enemy

One for the Moment

Before we say our last goodbye
I feel I need an open mind!
To say the words you need to hear
the words I feel that you Deserve.

My tongue swells up my mind goes blank
I'm sat alone cumbersome
Do I've the strength to pull this off
Do I've the Inclination
Do I've the right intentions here
Am I the incantation?

My thoughts haze over, where am I?
Is this another simulation...
I'm taken away from what's in front
and made to have no vision

I force myself to be as them
would it effect their progress?
To be without a measly piece
of life that they'd just forget.

I force myself to think the worse
To hurt them I care not
I push the darkness deep inside
and hope that its forgot

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