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Chrysalis, or transmutational hubris

Author: monad1
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I'm sure I will be handed the proverbial Socratic shot of hemlock for purveying such doctrinal dodder to my fellow denizens so have mercy on this elixir libation. The thought of such ethology entelechy to me on the zoomorphic zoolatry's social contiguities to demagoguery. Consider the objectified manifest's vicariousness it astral projection did to you to clairaudience clairvoyance. Noumenal sentience semantics!!!

Chrysalis, or transmutational hubris

A spiritually grandiose daydream today's dawn brought me.

Morphologically metamorphic integument, aura roan's rainbow mare.

Within your magical integument metamorphosis.
A transpositional interlude that transmogrifies our earthly shell into an immortal puissance, enshrouded in its mystical nimbus, objectified manifest's radix repartee.

Slowly we wind our mythical shroud round about us like a cocoon,
made of the mesmeric magic we exude.
An intoxicating ambrosia of enrapturing inebriation helping us prepare for the mystic prowess which will be ours.
We will be incarnated into a higher state of being.
Transcendental accession's ascension, elan vital's ne plus ultra apotheosis, orthogenesis overtures. Exogamy's homogeny.

We await within a veil of rainbows and light, whose opaque opulence becomes psychic clarity's evolutional fiduciary.
We were meant for this, corporeally preternatural becoming ethereally sublime.
Umbra ultraism and penumbral piquant.

We will become apex axis' crux, corporeal beings ultimate expression.
Mentality's trajectory theosophy's theophany.
Ethology's entelechy's zoomorphic zoolatry.

Submitted on 2022-02-25 17:56:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  The first thing I truly appreciate about your work is the apparently unbounded lexicon which drives a spike through the duller layers of what passes for my own consciousness. Herein I find my "word of the day" for a whole series of days as I (and other such lesser mortals) are forced to search the meaning of both the strange new words as well as relatively unfamiliar ones.

The poem gets ever better with subsequent readings after I've somewhat digested the meanings and their use in context here. I hereby reaffirm you my mystic high priest of elan vital!


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