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soul less


Author: latentlylyrical
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soul less



recoil in horror
declaring Never Again


Shame on your silence




Submitted on 2022-03-10 23:18:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Eighty eight views, two comments... are these people missing something?

Lloyd
| Posted on 2022-06-18 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
  Massive in its brevity.
Apparently something shocked you.
This is what current purveyors of media strives for, how to get anyone's attention... clicks rule.
There's more than enough bad stuff going on. It's a shame that some media types think that is not enough, they have to invent more. Lots of competition for attention spans out there.
If you believe David Icke there's trans-dimensional reptilians out there feeding on the negative emotional energy of humans. I imagine it's a real food fest going on for them of late.
If you're a fan of science fiction and fantasy perhaps this would be entertaining...

https://archive.org/stream/DavidIckeChildrenOfTheMatrix/David+Icke+Children+Of+The+Matrix_djvu.txt

Admittedly, the material is a bit of a mind-warp even with a quick scan. Probably best to realize such things might exist and then decide ignore it, but there's a reason for that. Oddly enough if the theory is correct then even reading about it creates yet more negative emotional energy and this too serves to feed the lizards. I'd rather they starve.

Peace, love, goodwill to all... they hate that.

Lloyd
| Posted on 2022-05-12 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
  Good to see you writing. Interesting senryu, I agree sometimes you just have to testify.
| Posted on 2022-03-11 00:00:00 | by monad1 | [ Reply to This ]


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