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Author: Narna
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I doubt that you will comment, lament that you might see sense and my scent is quite abhorrent.
I won't shower..
hail;
the stench of sorrow is
at the bower.





Submitted on 2022-03-17 09:54:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  80 views, one comment... wake up people!
| Posted on 2022-06-18 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
  On the other hand, it did rain this morning. I do appreciate a hint of rhyme, most the scent is in the rind.

Lloyd
| Posted on 2022-05-22 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]


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