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My Jupiter

Author: SavedDragon
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My Jupiter

Love, how Jupiter returns
You are my Taurus
The fire inside me that burns
I've waited my whole life to meet you
And I can't wait when I do
You bring me the Sun
When I am feeling blue
My constellation has met your horizon
You are the Aaron in my Sharon
You make me whole
Twelve years of this, years of bliss
You are my soul
I'll know with true loves first kiss
Oh how I can't wait to meet you
My Jupiter

Submitted on 2022-04-26 23:18:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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