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Author: theinforment
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There where the sunsets, lies a million eyes,
Upon the despair of a broken heart, finds emptyness
Through tears an heart felt loss, peace appears
Could you find your self again inside this empty shell
Given opportunities mistakes taken
I find the sunset as the same it was in my first sight
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