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Salacious Senryu

Author: monad1
ASL Info:    70/M/California
Elite Ratio:    3.44 - 20 /14 /12
Words: 9
Class/Type: Poetry /Legend
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of the human race is not but one more sperm in the spume of God

Salacious Senryu

Cosmic wherewithal
surrenders complaisantly
orgasmic climax

Submitted on 2022-08-01 02:04:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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| Posted on 2022-10-12 00:00:00 | by pioneerheart | [ Reply to This ]
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