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In ta mint

Author: theinforment
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When love rips your fucken heart out, when your left to pieces

In ta mint

In the illusion of life, of what is real, what means…
Through this hardship of loseing it all, I found my self !!!
The memories the pictures the words spoken …
Love was for ever till love was no more,
Glad an thankful, loved every moment of the time spent !!!
When the moon an stars see you at night !!!
I hope you know that I love you !!!

Submitted on 2022-09-08 06:15:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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