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"People Who Insist", 2022

Author: Rex Gold
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"People Who Insist", 2022

Always moving around

Are people who insist

That you should reopen old doors

Forgive their backbiting

Stop being icy

Be oblivious

to their obsession over you

Accept their surprise messages

Resemble their stupidity

That they should buy you dinner

On living where they are not welcomed

That self esteem be destroyed

and some offer made has no string

On helping people who don't want it

That a handshake is necessary

That their fake love is your water

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