"People Who Insist", 2022

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"People Who Insist", 2022

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Always moving around Are people who insist That you should reopen old doors Forgive their backbiting Stop being icy Be oblivious to their obsession over you Accept their surprise messages Resemble their stupidity That they should buy you dinner On living where they are not welcomed That self esteem be destroyed and some offer made has no string On helping people who don't want it That a handshake is necessary That their fake love is your water

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