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Julian's Faith


Author: pioneerheart
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Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Julian's Faith


Suspicious hearts tatter
Away at love
He hears the hall
Deliver gloom
And, innocent calls
Out to you
No one stops saying
Regretful taints
Across like swords
That slay in face
Where's the mom?
He needs
To hold, she's gone
Again.
Julian's faith,
Two clasped hands whispers
For her
He learns to summon
Mom
And, the new day




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