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"Meena", 2022

Author: Rex Gold
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"Meena", 2022

Blooming light bulb daffodils
how words just come easier
When you're alone.
With no one to fall for you
unless they watch over day and night.
Over the silver pen of your built world
Secure from promises of others
Sunsets your medicine, cherished by another--

Even when troll snot
breathes life into sparkling hyenas.
Even they can be driven to achieve--
May the body they call Shame
be ceremonial in version of gray leaves
Positional variety is expensive
During conflicts over water everyone needs---

Washed essence in inner peace Theta waves
mainly to not think of a tormentor today
Triangular with thrills and classic haze
Then defending a haylee who is flaming gay,
before a flight to Boston proceeds my Quercetin
A sea I eat from at the back of my cerebellum
Let go from cycles, once shielded from men
Never free from death, no matter how I live--

Why don't you take a breath
and compliment how your own voice is---

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