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Mantra of The Law

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Mantra of The Law

I love you like a brother
My brother tried to murder me
You are my sacred sister
The one who abandoned me as a baby

You are a grimy, soiled towel
That I dare not wipe with
Love is how the bull disembowels
Love is when you take a shit

Submitted on 2022-12-10 19:24:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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