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Mantra of The Law


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Mantra of The Law


I love you like a brother
My brother tried to murder me
You are my sacred sister
The one who abandoned me as a baby

You are a grimy, soiled towel
That I dare not wipe with
Love is how the bull disembowels
Love is when you take a shit




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