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Corruption Monday

Author: Blue Monk
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Not really a poem, so much as a reflection. ;)

Corruption Monday

Corruption Monday

it only seems appropriate
lets examine what is going on
certainly this should be celebrated

human foibles as human nature
leaning tendencies to venture
astray down a crooked path

The ninth hour seems appropriate
as so the ninth day...
more so with Monday

moon day
let's reflect
waning Gibbous Moon

corruption encroaches
from each their own
the growing shadow emerges

Submitted on 2023-01-09 12:39:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  What we need is the shade in that shadow my friend. Corruption needn't corrupt or so I like to think!!
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