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Author: Anchiale
ASL Info:    42/F/AL
Elite Ratio:    3.54 - 88 /73 /17
Words: 102
Class/Type: Poetry /Passion
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Hot like tar on a summer's day.


Icebox where? She's irreplaceable. Your heart beats wildly for and belongs to her.
She's that fever raging inside you, until you're delirious.
That bead of sweat, dripping from your forehead on a hot summer's day.
Hear that grumble? Your hunger's showing... better lick and devour her ice cream before it melts away!
Let her engulf you like a rock on the beach, as waves wash ashore.
Your desire being insatiable with an unquenchable thirst.
You know she's irreplaceable, leaving you craving for more....

Shoutout to those that know how to make you forget all of your troubles, even if only momentarily.

Submitted on 2023-01-29 19:50:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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