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"Los corazones", 2022

Author: Rex Gold
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"Los corazones", 2022

A whole bunch of pleasant lilacs
in the way of angelic coal
with so little violet

The permanent expansion of awareness
hits as a starlight dance
pressing pledges of ghosts,
and quiet breath of thorns
present like cat eyes
or bonds of hymns in valor--

Blessings from prime guardians
showing the thirst of Silla
and summer, and corruption

Tho whom in love with suffering much
at the bending of dawn
Speaking Sababi Quavo
whispering the mind
searching chilling innards
to escape any kind of cornballs

The self healing of Jaden Havoc
during the right regets
from some chosen Rul.
The nerve to come out
of his body, out of rose riders.
Success shall reveal him
when lustrous Sienna arrives,,,

Now, away from those who cannot dream.
Who cannot be honey without applause--
For when you dream into halo smiles
they'll be offended when you do
With the attempt to destroy who you are
before any jagged apex can explode--
Pauses and silences that utter truth,
I know something about it

To grow up, will cost an order of things.
Comes Fate's jar of elimination
with the Blings challenge to stay human.
As so much madness is hidden.
It'll be better to look inside
and come on gentle during any tide.

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