Yes, I could feel myself in this one...not in missing someone who is not there, but the self-loathing just to feel. I went through years of self-loathing because to feel anything else was too painful, and to feel nothing was like death.
hmm... not sure about this one... it seems...somewhat awkward... no, that's not right. It's missing something, I'm not quite sure what. Three inner lines create a wonderful image - "I wither like flowers, thrown in a dustbin, in the July heat" Amazing. The rest... I don't know. Midrange 3, I think. <><
thinking of the way u have written this i suggest u expand it further........this is feeling .......hence feel free to show more of them.....it is short and sweet .....will like to have it as long and sweet.... bye