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Submission Name: malnutritioned soul dots

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Author:	crazyphreshone
ASL Info:	31/M/NewYork
Elite Ratio:	4.42 - 66/70/30
Words:	33

Class/Type:	Poetry/Depressed
Total Views:	310
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	331

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malnutritioned soul dots

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circumstancial depression,
objectionable existance...
malnutrition feeding off repression,
growing emotional resistance.
empty blackhole devouring,
like a chaotic confusing concussion;
it's force much too overpowering,
it dealt an extaordinary wave or repercussions...

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